tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-180310412284750174.post7727331463117064668..comments2023-10-21T04:18:48.712-07:00Comments on Guerrilla Mom: Chasing The Tail Of My DarknessGuerrilla Momhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11292433099134289229noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-180310412284750174.post-81274881238746933732014-01-23T14:54:21.785-08:002014-01-23T14:54:21.785-08:00Tough stuff! I like the way you've used the t...Tough stuff! I like the way you've used the tension in the prompt to kick off a difficult conversation, as if the tweet set off the fracture.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-180310412284750174.post-29946628060981061682014-01-23T09:43:39.192-08:002014-01-23T09:43:39.192-08:00Oh, I love this! Especially the way you brought th...Oh, I love this! Especially the way you brought the line back at the ending with a completely different tone. Excellent dialogue and tension. Nicely done! :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-180310412284750174.post-53452985936030249382014-01-23T09:40:08.022-08:002014-01-23T09:40:08.022-08:00This is great! The conversation is very real, and ...This is great! The conversation is very real, and believable.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00209990328468448467noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-180310412284750174.post-55125393107625988482014-01-22T11:34:42.217-08:002014-01-22T11:34:42.217-08:00okay. so I literally snorted when I read the begin...okay. so I literally snorted when I read the beginning because of the prompt and the fact that people weren't really digging it, I don't think. but then you turned it into this whole story about their relationship. and we don't even have their names yet you truly say SO much. awesome.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-180310412284750174.post-87615359110845949232014-01-22T04:03:18.237-08:002014-01-22T04:03:18.237-08:00I loved the dialogue and the way you brought it fu...I loved the dialogue and the way you brought it full circle.BCIJohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18039174458955122552noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-180310412284750174.post-90552465866005869732014-01-22T03:20:59.571-08:002014-01-22T03:20:59.571-08:00Lol that 'you throw shit on the wall' line...Lol that 'you throw shit on the wall' line made me giggle :P Loved the story as it depicts the typical conversations in relationships. And I definitely hate twitter :P Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-180310412284750174.post-16005344361482557482014-01-21T20:41:31.937-08:002014-01-21T20:41:31.937-08:00Very realistic conversation. It's funny how i...Very realistic conversation. It's funny how in relationships the silly stuff usually holds a key to the major cracks-in-the-foundation stuff. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-180310412284750174.post-24743350188321982562014-01-21T14:08:33.906-08:002014-01-21T14:08:33.906-08:00This was fantastic so drawn in I want to know what...This was fantastic so drawn in I want to know what happened next. Great writing!!!!!!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02431847084321147125noreply@blogger.com